tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3529725084811715233.post1341590220029185603..comments2024-03-26T16:31:13.865-07:00Comments on Mark Lawrence: Page 1 critique - "No title supplied" by Sara AlvarezMark Lawrencehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16877925828353073272noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3529725084811715233.post-59527074947557597142016-04-26T07:39:52.317-07:002016-04-26T07:39:52.317-07:00I applaud your ability to accept these comments wi...I applaud your ability to accept these comments with such grace. As I read them I thought to myself, "I'll never make it as an author because there's no way I'm going to even make a single page that isn't riddled with so many issues that Mark couldn't make 10 pages of corrections on" =p.<br />Keep up the good work!fraaak5https://www.blogger.com/profile/17618468981940626460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3529725084811715233.post-27561352277155749552016-04-26T06:23:12.442-07:002016-04-26T06:23:12.442-07:00First of all, thank you very much for reviewing th...First of all, thank you very much for reviewing this. I really thought you wouldn't choose my page to post on your blog, so this was a very nice surprise. I'm also elated you gave an honest opinion about it (since my best friend, the other person I showed this to was too afraid to hurt my feelings to give me a real opinion). Of course I disagree with some of the things you wrote (though it might just be me feeling defensive about my own writing) but I also agree with a lot of observations you made. You are right, it is lacking description. The main character does seem more horny than anything else (though that was somewhat intentional. After all, it is 'that' kind of book).<br />All in all I'm very thankful you took the time to read this and I will try to use your observations to better my book.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com