tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3529725084811715233.post4916406555489762726..comments2024-03-26T16:31:13.865-07:00Comments on Mark Lawrence: Chapter Critique CornerMark Lawrencehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16877925828353073272noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3529725084811715233.post-38395602661927265922018-02-26T04:42:30.525-08:002018-02-26T04:42:30.525-08:00That's a pity. I really liked your page 1 citi...That's a pity. I really liked your page 1 citiques. Although I'm not a writer, they did improve my reading, as you made points that I had never thought of before. I'm pretty sure both amateur writers and average readers took lessons from your work.<br />Thanks a lot!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13836898846236699010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3529725084811715233.post-27566301380494274122017-11-08T00:51:38.510-08:002017-11-08T00:51:38.510-08:00I would love a first chapter critique from you, Ma...I would love a first chapter critique from you, Mark, even if it was "mean". Joybellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13993396155707210261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3529725084811715233.post-82632364023290044932017-11-04T08:05:01.584-07:002017-11-04T08:05:01.584-07:00I very much appreciated your comments on my first ...I very much appreciated your comments on my first page (and realized afterwards from your comments that I should have sent the first page from chapter one) but you gave me loads of quality ways to help sharpen my craft (http://mark---lawrence.blogspot.ca/2015/11/page-1-critique-wc513-by-mike-hillcoat.html). <br /><br />And I did specify "relentless and brutal."Mike Hillcoathttp://www.second-apocalypse.comnoreply@blogger.com