Saturday, 19 March 2016

Age is just a number?

On Goodreads I was asked:

Were you worried about making the MC Jorg so very young? He commits all these atrocities so why make him 13? Do you find it takes away from the credibility - the 'believabiltiy' if you will, of the plot? Or was it done in order for a younger audience to be able to relate to him?

& I replied:

Mark Lawrence I wasn't worried, no.

Jorg was inspired by Alex from the 1962 classic A Clockwork Orange who is similarly youthful and prone to violence.

In the Broken Empire his age serves various important ends.
The themes in the trilogy include those revolving around
(i) the nature vs nurture issue,
(ii) the ambiguities in responsibility and purpose that arise from the protagonist's age, and
(iii) the disparity between what Jorg tells the reader about his motives and responsibility and what the reader actually deduces
(iv) the changes wrought in us through experience as opposed to those wrought by simply growing.

I rely on my readers having the imagination to cope with the idea that along with ghosts, dream-witches, and magical mutants, there might be some (or at least one) people who at 14 (as Jorg is for 90% of the first book) might act in many regards as older than their age.

A few readers appear to think protagonists are plucked at random from the population and are overwhelmingly likely to be 'average'. This strikes me as odd. If I write a book about a lottery winner, Olympic champion, or mind-reader will readers cry out that it's hardly believable that this random guy has won the lottery / is better at running fast than 99.999999999% of other young men his age / can read minds...

The books weren't written for a young audience.

But how far are we being asked to stretch our imaginations here? Is a 14 year old who acts in many ways like someone of 20+ as extraordinary as a talking dragon? A flying unicorn? Or merely as extraordinary as a ghost or a mind-reader? Or even just as large a mental leap as an orc or a secondary world. Or just a rarity we might encounter in our own world?

In Prince of Thorns at age 14 Jorg is described as six foot tall, strong with it.

This is Robert Bobroczky - he was 7'4" at the age of 13. Jorg was nowhere near that tall.


This is Jake Scehllenschlager at 14. He could dead-lift 300 pounds. Jorg was nowhere near that well-muscled.


This is Jacob Barnett. He taught himself calculus, algebra, geometry, and trigonometry in a week. At 12 he was working towards a PhD in quantum physics. Jorg was nowhere near this clever.


Here's Marjorie Gestring who at age 13 won an Olympic gold medal for diving. Jorg doesn't win any fights against grown men one on one in Prince of Thorns. And he's not going for an Olympic sword fighting medal against all comers from the entire planet - just facing people he meets in a small patch of France.



Everyone knows about Alexander the Great's exploits at a young age, but he's not unique, just rare.

In 1500 at the age of 13 Ismail won his first major battle against Shirvan, the country that was responsible for the death of his family. In 1501, at the age of 14, he captured Tabriz and ruled the whole of northwestern Iran, declaring himself Shah of Iran the next year. Jorg's conquests in his 14th year were very small in comparison.

And a boy of 14 with lieutenants to back him up leading a bandit gang? Johnny and Luther Htoo were the infamous chain-smoking twins who led a large rebel gang in Burmah at age 12.


So ... yes, people who freak out over Jorg's age and put the book down because they know some 14 year old boys who aren't like that ... I don't get them.







Saturday, 12 March 2016

I found an old story of mine ... a *very* old story!

Here's the start of the tale. When it starts to pall, skip to the end for more detail!

It was very dark in the alley, only the rustle of rats crossing the alley could be heard. Smith waited, hidden in a doorway and heard the expected sound of footsteps. He slowly drew out his knife. Smith waited until the man had gone past. Then he crept up behind him and plunged his knife deep into the mans back. The man fell silently to the path, the only sign of his wound was a slit in his silk shirt and a large red patch around it. Smith bent down and serched the man pockets; a smile came over his dirty face as he drew out a leather wallet he put it in his own pocket and disape[e]red around a corner.


   [snip some counting of the spoils and selling them at a pawn broker]

He flung open the door of the barn and the gave a gasp of horror and astonishment for there in the barn were five of the kings soldiers. Come with us your under ar[r]est" Said one of the soldiers, Smith slammed the door shut and ran for his life.


[It goes on, five and a bit pages, ending with]

some soldiers came and arrested him and two day later he was hanged.


The teacher writes at the end. Good, though the ending was rather sudden.

This was written in pencil in my school English book on the 26th of May in the long hot summer of 1976!

I was 10 years old ... and writing grimdark? :)

I've included the teacher's corrections in []. You'll see they're rather sparse and that although even in 1976 I was writing "your" instead of "you're" my teacher failed to correct me!



Another book contains my 1977 review of the Hawkmoon books by Michael Moorcock (apparently my mother recommended them!), and this 1977 book review of "U-Boat" that shows an early interest in morally ambiguous characters...

"The best book I've read this term is called U-Boat. I like it because no one is portrayed as being entirely good or for that matter bad. It is full of ingenious situations and problems and equally ingenious ways of getting out of them and solving them. [it continues]"




As a footnote: I have no recollection of writing anything that's in these books! Scary...










Thursday, 10 March 2016

Prince of Thorns ... in China!

I never imagined my work would appear in Chinese. But it's going to be! Published by ChongQing Foresight Information, no less!

My name in Chinese:  马克 · 劳伦斯

Here's the cover for Prince of Thorns.


I really like the cover. It emphasizes that this is a character-driven book, as much about the mind of our protagonist as about what he does.

[UPDATE] ChongQing did some market research and modified the cover to:









It would be great to find a site that matched Chinese fantasy covers to their UK/US counterparts. Without the English script it's hard to know what you're looking at.


I came up with a few on Google, a Chinese version and a UK/US version. Obviously the books I've chosen are very well known and some have many UK/US covers. Apologies in advance if I got anything wrong:















Sunday, 6 March 2016

Bookheads

Contest Closed!
Win a free, signed book!


These are two very rare copies of The Liar's Key in paperback. Thanks to a miscommunication they have a shiny gloss finish. The Prince of Fools paperback has a soft touch finish. The error was spotted and the main printing will be soft touch. So like a misprinted stamp or dollar bill ... these are worth ... well probably not much. But they are copies of a book you might want sent to you for free!


To win one of them, just send me a selfie (or other personee) of you or a friend with a book on their head. Balance two for twice the chance to win, seventeen for seventeen times the chance. No supports, no photoshop! Nothing but books.

Go!

Contest closed!

Mail me your photo at empire_of_thorns@yahoo.co.uk - 1 entry per person. Entries will be posted here.

ENTRIES
Every entry has a chance to win - more books = more chances.


The winners are (thanks to random.org): Shalini #37 and Jeff #11

Very many thanks to all for some great contributions.



#38 Sam (3)



#37 Shalini (24)



#36 Tracey (1)



#35 Caelan (5)



#34 Paul (10)



#33 Coen (25)



#32 Manca (11)



#31 Nao (6)


#30 Tobias (7)



#29 Brian (3)



#28 Shaun (4)



#27 Paul (36 ... although the cropping leaves room for doubt regarding the free-standing nature of this stack  :)  Hopefully the contest will see no more fatalities.)



#26 David (16)



#25 Nick (14)



#24 Pedro (4)



#23 Cade (1 or 80, either way, ouch!)



#22 Matt (3)



#21 M (3)



#20 German (9)



#19 Jhonatan (4 - impressive)



18 Bonnie (1)



#17 Jeremy (4 excellent ones!)



#16 Simona (2?)



#15 Lenita (7)



#14 Tin (7)



#13 Alex (18)



#12 Karel (I've suspicions this is fake...)



#11 Jeff (3)



#10 Paulo (1)



#9 Mary (3)



#8 Marc (2)

 

#7 Leonardo (13)



#6 Matt (1 biggie)



#5 Giacomo (1)



#4 David (5 excellent books)



#3 Kobe (13) 
(you can see it was an action shot! I suspect the balance was short-lived.)



#2 Charlie (13)



#1 Paul (2)
(I can vouch for his honesty & won't hold against him the fact we can't see the bottom end of the books)